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©2008-2009 *silvanoir
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Now you know where I've been
As you sleep, torn I am
Weighted down
Patiently
Born of love
You know I'm not dead
I'm just living in my head
Forever waiting...

On the ways of your desire
You always find a way
And thru it all
Into us all you move
Forgotten touch
Forbidden thought
We can never have enough
You know I'm not dead

Found below , The creatures scream
Stranglehold , A god machine
Begging to tear us out
Worn as hope
You know I'm not dead I'm just the tears inside your head
Forever waiting...

On the ways of your desire
You always find a way
And thru it all into us all you move
Forgotten touch
Forbidden thought
We can never have enough
You know I'm not dead

We all want to hold in the everlasting gaze
Enchanted in the rapture of his sentimental sway
But underneath the wheels lie the skulls of every c.o.g.
The fickle fascination of an everlasting god
You know I'm not dead

I'm just living in my head
Forever waiting
Forever waiting on cruel death
You know I'm not dead
I'm just living for myself
Forever waiting
You know I'm not dead


"Everlasting Gaze" [lyrics] (c) Smashing Pumpkins
Szayel [character] (c) Kubo Tite
art (c) SilvaNoir 2008

Critiques


:iconkeyblade93nanami:
The moment you lay eyes on this picture you are absolutely impressed. The colors used go perfectly with the theme, they are dark and gloomy but the image does not get lost. On the contrary, the highlights you added are perfect, it gives the feeling that he is 'going towards the light'. The background is very interesting, but it doesn't take away the focus from Szayel. The pose is very impacting too. It is very dramatic, making you empathize with him.

But what I liked the most of this drawing is the impact the meaning has. It kind of makes you see things through his point of view, and whether you like this character or not it makes you wish he doesn't die. In your drawing you make him appear powerful even when falling, which makes it even more believable that he will NOT die.

Very good job, keep that up. :)
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:iconrandomness123:
Wow, I love the colors.

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:iconkitti707:
This is really awesomeI love it ^^

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amazing pic and colors!!!
:iconraineyone:
gorgeous!

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:icontotally-an-otaku:
Hhhho shizzniss!!!! :0 I saw this in the new and it looks really awesome! xD I'm going to go raid your gallery now!!! Thank you!!!

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:iconnearagodz:
This is awesome. I love the pose and the backdrop is stunning.

The shoulder closest to the viewer seems awkward, maybe is the shoulder was 'balled' more it would look so.

But other than that this is great. :)
:iconsidonzo:
OMG!!! That is like the most awesome thing EVER!!!! <333333333333

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:iconsilvanoir:
agreed, that shoulder and arm are wrong. I'm still trying to figure out exactly what's wrong with it.

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